Hi there Rabid,
It’s awesome you’re so interested in this little loose end in Brink’s story. Now I wouldn’t want to contradict anyone’s cool theory about what’s going on in Brink. But since you asked, here’s what I thought was going on:
Chen’s Audio Log
[spoiler]Actually, I always thought she was entirely innocent, and it was just Chen’s paranoia about…Well, no, paranoia is the wrong word, it’s not an irrational fear, there clearly are agents and informants within the Resistance working for Security. It’s just that she wasn’t one of them.
I was thinking about the predicament of the innocent and non-militant civilian in a broken society. Once you have two implacably opposed factions in a society, totally mistrustful of each other, nobody is safe and the truth is no defence. When you’re a conspiracy theorist, nothing ever happens by accident. The Founders are desparately trying to keep the peace, trying to find a compromise that just isn’t there because for Chen and Mokoena, politics is a zero-sum game with only one winner and they can’t afford to let the other team win. Chen can’t believe that the Founders’ attempts at negotiation are anything but a cynical ploy:Chen Encrypted personal journal 08/12/43
“How sly are the Founders! They haven’t survived this long without learning to divide and rule. Only now do I realise they’re playing for time all along. What else could explain their inability to ever get anything done? No, they have something up their sleeves. Either Security is preparing something major against us or they know of a plot against me within the Resistance. That would explain everything. They’re dragging out negotiations, making a few minor concessions, while their plans to depose me gain force. I’ve worked too hard for too long for the people of Ark to lose now. I’ll have to escalate. Unless we go for broke now, we will lose all momentum. And I will have lost.”
And, of course, he’s sort of right. The Founders are indeed playing for time and holding something back - the truth about the attempts to reach the outside world (or at least, what the Founders told Mokoena is the truth). But Chen, an instinctive politican, self-styled voice of the people, is such an egotist, he takes everything personally. So when Chen learns that one of their safehouses is under surveillance, it can ONLY be because of a mole within the Resistance:
Chen Encrypted personal journal 02/12/45
“We have a traitor in our midst. I have been informed the fascists are secretly surveiling one of our safehouses. A mole within our ranks must have tipped them off. It makes me sick to think that one of our own - someone I’ve trusted with my life - is informing for those scum. I’ll find him. I don’t care what it takes.”
Which is what leads to this grim entry:
Chen Encrypted personal journal 02/15/45
“She denied it to the end, but she was clearly guilty. Amazing how she thought she could escape the consequences of her crimes. Another traitor uncovered and dealt with. Watch her husband. Perhaps, as he claims, he knew nothing of her crimes. Perhaps not. Watch him, watch who he meets: he may try to make contact with her spymasters in Security.”
But in Mokoena’s audio log we see that Security have been surveiling that safehouse since at least December 2044, and apparently only learnt about it by accident:[INDENT=2]
Mokoena Encrypted personal journal 12/08/44
“Some hotshot under my command disregards direct orders and lands on Pelgo 104D. He finds the place is NOT falling into the sea, he finds clear signs of human habitation. He stakes the place out, and sees terrorists and known sympathisers coming and going. We’ve bugged the place and are keeping it under surveillance…”
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<Further complication>
[INDENT=3]As a sidenote, poor old Director of Maintenance! He’s another innocent caught up in this. I thought of him as an honest man, but under the influence of or possibly blackmailed by Chen. It’s another secret within another secret: Chen knows that the Arkoral is beginning to lose structural integrity, but admitting that would reduce his authority, which would mean a “victory” for Mokoena and the Founders. So he plays for time, hoping for help from outside, and shifts the blame, makes the Director of Maintenance back him when he claims that Security patrols are causing structual damage, which has the added bonus of keeping them away from pelgos the Resistance can then use as safehouses.
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[INDENT=4]Chen Encrypted personal journal 01/24/44
I’ve told them - I’ve told them a hundred times and a dozen different ways about the problems with the Arkoral. Well, OK, not ALL of the problems. I can’t tell them that the Arkoral itself is dying, they’d blame Me. I’ll solve this problem, I’ll save this place, without making Mokoena king of it. So I explain away the failed Structural Integrity Tests results by blaming ocean acidification, or “Saline Corrosion of Cheap Unsealed Ferrous Rebar”, or - haha - “Structural Fatigue Due To Excessive Vibrations Caused By Security Helicopter Downwash, Or Erosion From The Wakes Of Security Patrol Boats”! [/INDENT]
I liked the detail that Mokoena was initially sympathetic to the Director of Maintenance, because we love to see our own predicament in other people, when it suits us to:
[INDENT=4]Mokoena Encrypted personal journal 03/27/43
“…that Director of Maintenance got roasted again for not miraculously solving all problems at once. The guy’s only doing his job, without the resources he needs to do it properly. I know the feeling. He deserves better.”[/INDENT]
And then of course when Mokoena finds out he’s been lied to, his sympathy turns to grim fury:
[INDENT=4]Mokoena Encrypted personal journal 12/08/44
"…The Director of Maintenance looked me in the eye and declared that pelgo structurally unsound and told me to stop patrolling near it. And I believed him. And now we find there’s been a terrorist safehouse there for months. I think it’s about time I paid him a personal call. Get CounterIntelligence to recommend a suitable replacement.[/INDENT]
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My suspicion was that after his entirely innocent wife was tortured and executed by the Resistance, the husband was understandably distraught and embittered, which makes him a target for Security Counter-Intelligence trying to turn him. I think I actually wrote a diary entry for Mokoena where he says that his Counter-Intel department had identified a possible new informant - a disaffected Resistance guy whose wife had been erroneously purged by Chen - and they were considering making a cautious approach to him. And of course when they do, one of Chen’s Counter-Intel guys is trailing the man, and sees him being talked to by a known Security agent, which only confirms their suspicions. Chen would assume that both husband and wife had been Security spies all along when in fact, both husband and wife were innocent civilians, and their deaths were a completely avoidable human tragedy. But when you have two suspicious, ruthless enemies, anyone caught between them gets trapped and destroyed.
So why didn’t we provide all the clues? Partly we were running short of time with Nonso Anosie, the utterly excellent actor who played Mokoena, and couldn’t record the line. Partly it was because the explanation was derailing Mokoena’s narrative arc, as he moves from human doubt to hardline certainty. And partly, I think, because I loved the notion that we’d leave a narrative thread hanging for people to puzzle over, and one day I’d be able to tell a particularly alert forum member the whole story : )
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Thanks for your interest!
: )