Movie started alright - the intro, then it went down hill from there.
Most outside jumps or jumps with a skybox were WAY too bright.
The effect that you kept throwing in there - The flash of light - or something was horrible were everything goes white.
You seem to have some kind of clipping effect to increase your fps I guess, but makes it look crappy. Like some messed up fog. (the caulk effect in the distance)
Music and jumps and effects need to have some kind of sync. I didn’t notice it in the first part of the movie, but then you threw in some dubstep.
You made no effort to line the jumps up with the music, so you jump on a bass beat or something, just sounded horrible. Also the effects just seemed to be randomly thrown in.
As for the content - good jumping, but all normal stuff, nothing new, bit boring.
The jump from tranquil should be removed though imo, he looks at the floor for the whole jump …