Hey thought I would share my commentary I did of Dirty Bomb. Not the greatest of games in term of kills and what not but I still had fun in it. I would be really happy if you would watch it and give me some feedback on what I can do to improve on it so cheers!
YouTube Commentary
YT_Arunwillkillyou
(YT/Arunwillkillyou)
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Hey man i loved you video 
and for some feedback i have 2 advice :
1- Aim at the head (faster kills)
2- Be more upbeat
I hope these will help you and improve your game play.
I have a new YouTube channel too but i haven’t done any commentary vids yet, just game play check it out at
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ab7nK94p6kg
I’ve subbed like / likes / commented on your vid and would appreciate it if you could do the same and we can maybe work together sometime. Thanks!