Remember to always put your .pk3 file inside a .zip. Otherwise some people have problems when you release your map as a standalone .pk3 cause the computer cocks the file up. 
Okay, first thing… z-axis fighting!
I hope you’ve noticed the z-axis fighting thats throughout this map, theres more than I can poke a stick at 
And also lots of missing texture(s)
The hills need to be made with a terrain tool like Easygen or gtkgensurf, its alot easier and you produce heaps better looking terrain than creating it manualy using lots of brushes 
I can jump the wall without dyno just by running up the side of the hill and jumping over the barbed wire with minimal damage.
Alot of things don’t make sense. Why are there so many trees? How does that bunker hold up structurly? Etc
If you look in the sky I thought I saw rain… but it never touches the ground and its a small patch of sky…