Merc: Huntress


(heavenlyCucumber) #1

Origin:
Huntress was an exellent soldier and hunter being recruited in a execute squad she rose to the highest of ranks in a matter of years but when an grenade blew of her left arm she was left in a hospital bed and forgotten, have’n gotten a prosthetic arm she modified it to her “special” needs and set out to become a merc.

Assault
Health=100
Speed= 440
Arm=5s
Defuse=8s

primary: nobody can deny her personal handgun just looks like a tool of the grim reaper himself being fully automatich
with extended clip and compensator truly makes her an Angel of Death
hochfire smg
smg-9

secodary
clauden-M9-Selbstadt .40

melee
cricketbat-combat knife- siletto

skill
Explosive Bolt: Huntress stretches her arm and fires an expolsive crossbow bolt from it the bolt will stick on any surface and enemy player if they where to be hit by it, the bolt detonades after 1.5 sec and deals 150 dmg in a radius of 30cm the bolt will only detonate when it hits a surface or enemy player the bolt has a cooldown of 17 sec the bolt will not experiences any drop.

appearance: She has black hair side cutted from both sides she has white eyes and a bandana whith a white skull on it covering her mouth.

For clothes she wears a white tank top under her black schoulder holsters, on the left side is her holsterd pistol and on the right her knife. She modified the look off her prosthetic arm with war paint, black stripes covering the upper arm

Tactics
hunterss has close quater combat weapons on her use your speed to your advantage, the bolt can be used to suppress small area’s or clearing out a room before running in, the bolt can also be used as a long ranged weapon because it has no drop

tactics againts her
stay at a longer range but watch out for that bolt tho, with a small health pool she can easly be taken out with two or even alone dont let her speed get the best of you, the bolt gives a bipping sound when its gone detonate so if you here a BIPP run


(HunterAssassin5) #2

first of all, i usually abstain from being a grammar nut or whatsit called, since most people just over react to that, but god damn, AT LEAST USE THE COMMAS AND FULL STOPS! its bloody hard to read this thing!

looking up and down, i guess this is supposed to be an assault character? you didnt say what class yourself, and nothing about the description points towards recon, fire support or medic, so assault is the most likely class this merc belongs to.

the ability seems to be a bit…undeveloped, in my opinion. its just a boost, you might think, but does this boost work only across land? can you boost into the air? you didnt say.
im also very touchy with new movement options and abilities, because it can easily make an op character simply by its ability to reach places no other merc can, so you might want to explain that away.
the ability to fire your gun AND damage any enemies you hit, even if you stop immediately after, is a but much. imagine a lagging teleporter than can still aim through his teleportation and hose you down with bullets as he pings back and forth.

you also try to slip in a new weapon. usually i dont care for the weapons, but since its a new weapon, it could probably fall into the category of ability.
fully automatic pistol. rate of fire? magazine size? reload speed? accuracy? recoil? damage per hit? damage per second? anything?


(gg2ez) #3

Complains about grammar, calls himself a “Grammar Nut”, doesn’t capitalise his sentences. :trollface:

Jk, you cool.


(HunterAssassin5) #4

i have to admit, though, you made me panic for half a second thinking i misunderstood what “abstain” means somehow.

either way, dont you have anything to say about this?


(gg2ez) #5

i have to admit, though, you made me panic for half a second thinking i misunderstood what “abstain” means somehow.

either way, dont you have anything to say about this?[/quote]

Seems a bit lacking. Ability is quite underwhelming and there’s really no reason to use this merc over any other.


(heavenlyCucumber) #6

well i did say its still a work in progress but thanks for the feedback


(heavenlyCucumber) #7

[quote=“TheRyderShotgun;120717”]first of all, i usually abstain from being a grammar nut or whatsit called, since most people just over react to that, but god damn, AT LEAST USE THE COMMAS AND FULL STOPS! its bloody hard to read this thing!

[/quote] sorry grammer isn’t my best thing :b


(heavenlyCucumber) #8

[quote=“TheRyderShotgun;120717”]

the ability seems to be a bit…undeveloped, in my opinion. its just a boost, you might think, but does this boost work only across land? can you boost into the air? you didnt say.
im also very touchy with new movement options and abilities, because it can easily make an op character simply by its ability to reach places no other merc can, so you might want to explain that away.
the ability to fire your gun AND damage any enemies you hit, even if you stop immediately after, is a but much. imagine a lagging teleporter than can still aim through his teleportation and hose you down with bullets as he pings back and forth.

[/quote] can you give some info how you would like this ability to play out then, mabye a completey diffrent one anyway thanks for the feedback


(HunterAssassin5) #9

nah, i can’t think of anything, sorry.


(heavenlyCucumber) #10

no problem i’l give it some more thought


(gg2ez) #11

[quote=“heavenlyCucumber;120905”][quote=“TheRyderShotgun;120717”]

the ability seems to be a bit…undeveloped, in my opinion. its just a boost, you might think, but does this boost work only across land? can you boost into the air? you didnt say.
im also very touchy with new movement options and abilities, because it can easily make an op character simply by its ability to reach places no other merc can, so you might want to explain that away.
the ability to fire your gun AND damage any enemies you hit, even if you stop immediately after, is a but much. imagine a lagging teleporter than can still aim through his teleportation and hose you down with bullets as he pings back and forth.

[/quote] can you give some info how you would like this ability to play out then, mabye a completey diffrent one anyway thanks for the feedback

[/quote]

Small improvements I thought of:

  1. Mark targets by hovering your crosshair over them and pressing Q.
  2. Quickly fly towards target, dealing damage and knockback.
  3. Cooldown based on how far you fly towards your target.

(heavenlyCucumber) #12

[quote=“gg2ez;121280”]

Small improvements I thought of:

[list=1]
[] Mark targets by hovering your crosshair over them and pressing Q.
[
] Quickly fly towards target, dealing damage and knockback.
[*] Cooldown based on how far you fly towards your target.
[/list][/quote]

I have completly changed Her going from Angel to huntress seening it beter fit the idea i had in my head i have also changed the skill ope you like it more if there’ anything you would like to to add to this skill just say it