I’m unable to tell from the picture: is one of the MGs removed from 1st objective area? Is only route from that side to the delivery now from that building which corner has been blown off? If so, it looks little bit too streamlined then, I think simply making delivery on-ground like you suggested in other thread and keeping the “maze” will give Defenders much harder time to hold all the routes possible to get to the delivery.
Pardon me for not providing screenshot to imply what I mean, but maybe you could offer us some too to show a little more specifically what are these changes meaning with in-game screencaps @Faraleth . Like you did with the other Dome rework thread, that pic was nice and informative about the delivery area.