The mapper has requested I post his map for him:
Go here for screen shots:
http://lowlife.homepage.dk/bayraidss/index.htm
Map download here:
http://lowlife.homepage.dk/beta.htm
Comments are welcome as this is a beta1 map…
Addtional download site HERE
Looks good but i think the sky isn’t for this map, it looks a little bit small too no? but good work 
Whee! /me drools…
Awesome Ide to make it rain in desert. The skybox I think works but maybe as oS!Digital said it is little bit off.
me hugs those raindrops ontop of water, steals them and runs away shouting kawaii!!!
Sorry my english… i want mean this isn’t the correct sky for a desert, i think, it’s too dark, and LOL, rain on a desert 
Wed May 5 09:25:41 CDT 2004
Files to analyze:
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SiliconSlick
Looks good. As the other said, rain? hehe I think there’s a bit too much water too for a desert map and it seems to me it’s a bit too dark. Maybe adding a _minlight or something similar might help.
All in all it doesn’t look bad at all.
as MadJack said, the black sky with yellow terrain looks out of place. Maybe if the terrain was more of a blue to get that moonlight kind of feeling. I like that bunker structure though and I like the idea of rain in the middle of the desert is cool.