Dude, that is one whacked out map…I like it 
Sure breaks the normal look of a warehouse, train depot, ammo bunker, <insert common et cliche here>
The map at 30 minutes is too long, I’ve adjusted it to 15 for my server.
The “construction destroyed” is repeated a bit too much because it is so easy to destroy things…stop the voice spam 
The low wooden walkway that goes straight across has too many gaps in the boards, it is too easy to follow down into the water.
When I get a demo of 40 players on this map, I’ll send it to you, great work 
ps. Maybe you can add some looping music to the map, something frisky
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